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Battlefield by GoldenTigerDragon Battlefield by GoldenTigerDragon
Commission for *Artomis! :rose:

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Wow Goldy, nice to see some art from you again! <3 I'm still new to critiques, so I hope this is helpful!

I love how intense this piece feels, and as always I love the amount of detail you packed in! Especially the fluff on the white character's jacket orz This really looks like a gruesome battle, and if I were actually there, I'd want to leave ASAP. x_x

The pouring rain makes it look like this fight would be miserable, and although you've got it splashing up from obstacles (wings, the scythe, etc), I feel that because the rain looks as though it's coming down heavy, there should be a little more emphasis on the splashing. Right now it looks as though it's splashing up from a light rain.

I also like how the background adds to the weather! Those clouds are pretty awesome! I don't know where these characters are fighting, but some dead/blood stained grass could help contribute to the feel of a deadly battle. I also think the lightning could use a little glow or something else to give it some more 'wow', like the rest of your picture does!

And the characters look awesome - they definitely look like they could be responsible for those wounds. There's a lot of blood near the white character's arm, and I just felt like the sleeve fluff should have a bit of dirt or blood on it as well. Other than that, s/he seems fine c: Upon closer inspection of the black character, I see that she's pouring blood, but I only see a few gashes? (Good job for having their wounds match up to their opponent's weapons, by the way!) She is a dark colored character though, so I might be missing some wounds.

I had a lot to type, but really it was about some of the smallest details. You did a really awesome job and you've managed to make me stare at a piece for a long time yet again! <3 Keep up the good work - I can't wait to see what you draw next! ^^
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Darrienwhite Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Too legit Hatsune Miku-19 (Miku Miku Shite Ageru) 
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SpykeyWulfgang Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your art work is so amazing, it makes me want to try even harder to be able to create beautiful art just like you.Drawing Awesome Face Icon
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GoldenTigerDragon Oct 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :meow:
practice practice ;D
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SpykeyWulfgang Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^.U.^ indeed!
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VanitasDaBoom Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's really epic =D
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nitroburner Jan 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Nothing in my Garbage, THERE'S NOTHING IN MY GARBAGE!
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WHOA
THIS


.....this deserves one of THESE comments . Totally . :stare: So prepare yourself, and your eyes ~~~




SO YEAH
When I saw it on a thumbnail I already knew it's gonna be AMAZING but now I look closely and I know I was wrong, because it's far beyond "AMAZING" :iconwhutplz:
I mean just LOOK AT IT OMG ;______;

These POSES are awesome, I love how the dark character squats omg <3 And the blood here, just WHAT . :iconredheart-plz: It's so realistic and darrrrk <3

And I really love the rain effect > u < :heart:
Both the raining drops, and the water flowing down the characters . ;_;
And THAT SHADING
It fits the picture GODDAMN GREAT I MEAN IT'S
so dark and bloody pciture, and the sahding just adds to it, I mean these parts of the characters where you ca't even see it good because it's so dark and because of rain ~ amazing effect girl !! ! <3

Whole picture is STUNNING . :iconwhutplz:
I could stare and stare and staaaareeee at itttttttt....

instant favourite girl . instant favourite . :stare:

*gasp

I've JUST NOTICED how the blood falls down on grass (dark character) ;_____________; OMGAJSDKLaSJDKLASJ YOU DID GREAt JOB ON IT TOO IT LOOKS SO REALISTIC JUTS LASJDKLASJD <33
How are you doing blood? ;_; It's about colour, or blending, or just WHAT . :iconwthplz:

And hair looks amazing toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ;-;
And it's LINEARTLESS LASKJDKLASJDKSAJ X__________X
I love it lovelovelove
it's so realistic
and dark
and bloody

the only thing it's missing are graves in farer background . XD

Though this lightning, compared to details in all image, looks kinda... wrong . Shall be more detailed, just like the rest .

OVerall, you did WONDERFUL job on this one, it's... I dunno, one of your best pictures so far ? ;-; :heart:

Amazing .
AMAZING .


AMAZINGGGGGGgggggggggg

killmenow ; u ;
it's far too good

to excist .

; u ;

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<3
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GoldenTigerDragon Jan 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
wwwwwwWWWHOOOOoooAAaaaaawwww O U O

You know I NEVER get tired of THESE kind of comments <3 <3 <3
I'm not very proud of that lightning I did back there either :'D Feels like I just totally forgot how to lightning :icony-u-noplz:
Then I also forgot about searching a reference oTL --wut.

But girl I'm so glad you like ;_; Thanks very much <333
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Heheheheh I know <3 ~
That's why I decided it's time to get back to those . :eyes: ~~~ Or at last from time to time . XDDD;

Ffff XD Well, good thing it's not the main point of the drawing . |D;

You're welcome girl . <3
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