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It was supposed to be a sketch...

So the challenge was no layers at all except for the BG and no sketching
okay I sketched the body outlines but nothing else :v
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Hello hello hello Goldy! I will give a critique and whatnot. I'll try my best to weigh out the pro's and cons u v u

okay! First, let's start with the pro's. Everyone loves a good compliment.

- I think the coloring is beautiful
- the fur is very nice. It helps to classify that Goldy is short haired
- The back leg anatomy is very nice! I envy you.
- The claws are well done with the placement on the fingers; as well as the fingers in general.

Noooow for the conssss. ;(

- Even if it's a stylistic choice, I think Goldy may look a bit too skinny. Even though she is laying down like so, it's as if she's lacking a couple vital organs.
- I think perhaps you should give the arms more curves and more shapes
- Goldy's left eye (the viewers left, not Goldy's left) Seems a bit too far away from the line of the snout? I'm not sure how to explain it exactly, but it doesn't seem to connect just right.
- the snout seems to be bent a bit awkwardly to the side
- I know that this completely goes to the design, but the tail blade seems as though it would be too heavy for her tail? Unless, (unsure if states in REF,) the metal is lightweight


Other than the above, good job! You have great art and good color choice. u v u A couple things to work with the anatomy, but all in good time