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That random dragon thingy over there is NOT a real dragon. :XD: It's supposed to be a statue. : D

I wanted to own this one for suppari:heart::heart::heart:
I LOVE to get comments from her! She's so kind! ;_;
Epic comments FTW!<3 I made this for youuuuuu~! :lol:


~Hope you like it!~

Made: GIMP 2.6.8 and mouse.
Time: 9-10 h ...?
Spyro, Cynder and Sparx © Sierra
Art © GoldenTigerDragon
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:iconhelen-drawings:
I will not coment... :iconihateitplz: SO I WILL WRITE A CRITICK!!! :iconiloveitplz:
I'ts really awssom ^^ i love how you made background and dragon's texture ^-^ I didn't understand wy sparx is smiling :|
well it's great shading there and i love spyro's wings pose ^^
I think spyro's paws are small ^^; Now really sparx is not whit background green's color ^^ he's a big banana :noes:
well there is nothing to say only that i love you're works and keep them up buddy! ^^ well i need more words to publish this so i will write an ramdom thing lalalalalaalalalalala ok i'm done XD bye and I can't wait for the next one!" ^^


~love HD :heart:
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Critique by Shrimpyzilla May 13, 2010, 4:16:06 AM
First of all, I want to say; wow. This is simply amazing compared to the most mouse art I've ever seen.

The colour are bleded quite well, and you don't seem to use that much of the boring way to just put white and black to shading. Points for that.
The picture has a nice feeling between haze and glow, which can just clearly be seen off the characters, and it's really well done in the eyes.
You also seem to handle layer transparency pretty well, since Sparx has those transparent wings. But you could also have added that to the green flame (?) the black creature breaths.
I really like the eyes, the shininess. But the pupils are a bit too big, makes you easily think they're on drugs... Or something. And why is Sparx looking away? It looks a bit off the picture, but it's no major problem.
It's great how you added shadows if the characters over there, I barely ever see people do that. It gives more realisted feel to the picture.
You seem to follow the light point pretty well, too. But, if the light comes from the green flame, the hidlights should be tinted a bit more green since there rarely is many other light points in caves, which I have understood the characters to be in.

Now, hmm.. The textures.
As I read your artit's comment, the black creature is a statue. But.. the texture remins me more like of something fluffy. Something with fur. Usually rocks have a really rough, cracky texture. In this picture, it seems to be smooth with really soft shades. When looking at the statue, you could except it's old, and rough. You could look up for references in rocks and statues, since they tend to have strong difference in shades and especialy when made of rock, different shades of the colour, rough texture and cracks
Now, to the dragons' scales.
I do see that they are there.. But they've done really, really light. They actually can barely be seen, which isn't really a good thing. And, I don't know if it's the Spyro style which I'm not that familiar with, but why isn't there any scale texture in the heads? When texturing something, the whole character/area should be textured, otherwise because it looks.. Rushed and messy.
I know it's very hard to work with a mouse. But really, when you use a lot of time to the drawing it's just better than the one you didn't.
I don't have anythign to say about the texture of the green liquid, it's done well. Looks flowing and glimmering, like they usually do.

Some of the shading is really light, and it's hard to tell where it goes and where it doesn't. Adding a bit depth to them would brings the characters out a bit more, which would help understand the picture.
Also, when using light shades, try to not colour the lineart. It will just make it harder to understand.

Overall, there's no big flaws, the picture is well done for a mouse, but try brining out the textures and colours a bit more in the future.

- Luxy
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FlashbackingArtist00 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Le amazingness right here!
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redwallfvs Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student General Artist
This turned out really nice! Realistic, even! Great job :)
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spasmdragon Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
u want a critiq well heres mine i cant say ant thing bad about it the pic looks great great job :D
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ShallowPoolTheWolf Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Student
WOW! I love the eyes! :D
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erich84502 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2010
Bad breathe?
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niathedragon Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
its awsome!!
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! 8D
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niathedragon Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
np:)
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niathedragon Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
sparx:gess use some mouth wash dragon statue your melting me!
cynder:*sniggering*im glad!!you deserv it
spyro:*also sniggering*cynder thats not nice but it is funny
statue:HEY!!oh is it realy that bad?
cynder,spyro and sparx:YES!!!
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DerpedWater Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
What? I didn't understand that, bad grammar.
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Dark-Asin Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
O___o this is InDEED AWESUMSAURSTIQUE! :iconbluewhatplz:
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Omg thanks! 8D
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Dark-Asin Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
NP! and Thaaankz.. :paranoid: I was inspired to do a Halloween Asin now! :XD: I saw Casfy's Halloween Skye, but I could have NEVER guessed it was coz of you and stuff xD
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Lol that happens. x'D
Hmm I think EVERYONE has seen Halloween Skye.... :XD:
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niathedragon Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
i have its awsome!!
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Dark-Asin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
yh, I know :iconwhutplz: she should really put a link to anything related to teh pic, really :XD: like I do xd

oh and this will be teh first year I'll actually celebrate Halloween here on dA :iconwhutplz: last Year I only KIiiiIINDA celebrated eet xd;;; but thi s year Im' ACTUALLY dressing up Asin !! :iconanimefaceplz: did teh Sketch >w> I won't show to anyone until it's done, tho :XD: even tho I wanna D: xd
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Legend-Of-Cynder Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
Oles hyvä :D
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Legend-Of-Cynder Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010
Ei herrajumala sä oot tosi taitava piirtää :la:
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Whee kiittooos! :la:
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Legend-Of-Cynder Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2010
:cowtwo:

Argh osaisinpa mäkin piirtäänoin hyvin x33

//joo mullon tylsää xDD
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Lol. XDD Kiitoss! =P
Mulki o tylsääää
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Legend-Of-Cynder Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2010
Oi helvetti kuinka hieno :3
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clawshokdragon Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
awesome work! omg, it really is! ;o
i love it :love: its so detaild :O just amazing <3 i'm telling ya again, ur one of my favourite artists! <3
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Student Digital Artist
D'awww thanks a lot again! :glomp: I'm glad you like it!<3 ;3
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clawshokdragon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
Nooo problem :) <3
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collective-soul Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Student General Artist
This is so adorable! I used to play this game when I was little on my Gameboy!
Brings back memories! Great use of colour and tones as well! ^^
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2010  Student Digital Artist
D'awww thank you very much! ^u^
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collective-soul Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2010  Student General Artist
You're welcome! ^.^
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blowyl83 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010
OMG!!!! This artwork looks amazing! I mean, it is awesome!!! I really like it!
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!! 8DD
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blowyl83 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010
:D YOU WELCOME :D
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Angel1357 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconpfftplz:this is not just great....IT'S FREAKN' AWESOMESAUCE! :iconimhappyplz:..the perspective is just GREAT!!:la:and their poses,textures are EPIC!:lol: you must have putted a lot of effort into this cuz it's really beautiful:D :love:
(dun,dun DUN!! I have commented :noes: that hasn't happened in a long time XD )
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thanks soo much! x33 I'm glad you like it!! :lol:
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Angel1357 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
anytime:aww::D
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sonyathehedgragon Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010
wow that is awesome!!!!
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thanks again! ;D
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sonyathehedgragon Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
your welcome
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exxiry Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Student General Artist
Wow.......The perspective you made on this pic looks amazing :D
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! ^^
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exxiry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Student General Artist
np:D
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cynderandspyrorocks Featured By Owner May 30, 2010   Traditional Artist
cool and your really a good drawer i love it so much XP XD !!!!
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner May 30, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :lol:
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cynderandspyrorocks Featured By Owner May 31, 2010   Traditional Artist
your wellcome and i liked cynders face it looks funny !!!! XDD XP ^^
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THEKIDWITHAKNIFE Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student General Artist
preeeeeety!!!
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thank youuu! x)
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Vampire-Bat365 Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
They say not to steal art. How the heck is it possible to steal art on the internet?

"Oooo~ I'm gonna virtually grab that picture and do whatever with it!"

That doesn't make sense. I don't want to steal art, I just want to know how it's possible.
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Digital Artist
It IS possible! You just download the picture, steal it and say ''that's your own.'' <.< Or anything else!
There's veeery many ways to steal art D:
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Vampire-Bat365 Featured By Owner May 27, 2010
Ooooooooooohhhhhhhh, now it makes sense.... ^^;
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Vampire-Bat365 Featured By Owner May 23, 2010
Who's the dragon, whom I think they're glaring at, supposed to be?
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner May 25, 2010  Student Digital Artist
It's not anyone, it's a statue. XDD Lol.
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