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Green Breath by GoldenTigerDragon Green Breath by GoldenTigerDragon
That random dragon thingy over there is NOT a real dragon. :XD: It's supposed to be a statue. : D

I wanted to own this one for suppari:heart::heart::heart:
I LOVE to get comments from her! She's so kind! ;_;
Epic comments FTW!<3 I made this for youuuuuu~! :lol:


~Hope you like it!~

Made: GIMP 2.6.8 and mouse.
Time: 9-10 h ...?
Spyro, Cynder and Sparx Sierra
Art GoldenTigerDragon
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I will not coment... :iconihateitplz: SO I WILL WRITE A CRITICK!!! :iconiloveitplz:
I'ts really awssom ^^ i love how you made background and dragon's texture ^-^ I didn't understand wy sparx is smiling :|
well it's great shading there and i love spyro's wings pose ^^
I think spyro's paws are small ^^; Now really sparx is not whit background green's color ^^ he's a big banana :noes:
well there is nothing to say only that i love you're works and keep them up buddy! ^^ well i need more words to publish this so i will write an ramdom thing lalalalalaalalalalala ok i'm done XD bye and I can't wait for the next one!" ^^


~love HD :heart:
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Critique by Shrimpyzilla May 13, 2010, 4:16:06 AM
First of all, I want to say; wow. This is simply amazing compared to the most mouse art I've ever seen.

The colour are bleded quite well, and you don't seem to use that much of the boring way to just put white and black to shading. Points for that.
The picture has a nice feeling between haze and glow, which can just clearly be seen off the characters, and it's really well done in the eyes.
You also seem to handle layer transparency pretty well, since Sparx has those transparent wings. But you could also have added that to the green flame (?) the black creature breaths.
I really like the eyes, the shininess. But the pupils are a bit too big, makes you easily think they're on drugs... Or something. And why is Sparx looking away? It looks a bit off the picture, but it's no major problem.
It's great how you added shadows if the characters over there, I barely ever see people do that. It gives more realisted feel to the picture.
You seem to follow the light point pretty well, too. But, if the light comes from the green flame, the hidlights should be tinted a bit more green since there rarely is many other light points in caves, which I have understood the characters to be in.

Now, hmm.. The textures.
As I read your artit's comment, the black creature is a statue. But.. the texture remins me more like of something fluffy. Something with fur. Usually rocks have a really rough, cracky texture. In this picture, it seems to be smooth with really soft shades. When looking at the statue, you could except it's old, and rough. You could look up for references in rocks and statues, since they tend to have strong difference in shades and especialy when made of rock, different shades of the colour, rough texture and cracks
Now, to the dragons' scales.
I do see that they are there.. But they've done really, really light. They actually can barely be seen, which isn't really a good thing. And, I don't know if it's the Spyro style which I'm not that familiar with, but why isn't there any scale texture in the heads? When texturing something, the whole character/area should be textured, otherwise because it looks.. Rushed and messy.
I know it's very hard to work with a mouse. But really, when you use a lot of time to the drawing it's just better than the one you didn't.
I don't have anythign to say about the texture of the green liquid, it's done well. Looks flowing and glimmering, like they usually do.

Some of the shading is really light, and it's hard to tell where it goes and where it doesn't. Adding a bit depth to them would brings the characters out a bit more, which would help understand the picture.
Also, when using light shades, try to not colour the lineart. It will just make it harder to understand.

Overall, there's no big flaws, the picture is well done for a mouse, but try brining out the textures and colours a bit more in the future.

- Luxy
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redwallfvs Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This turned out really nice! Realistic, even! Great job :)
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spasmdragon Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
u want a critiq well heres mine i cant say ant thing bad about it the pic looks great great job :D
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ShallowPoolTheWolf Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Student
WOW! I love the eyes! :D
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erich84502 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2010
Bad breathe?
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niathedragon Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
its awsome!!
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! 8D
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niathedragon Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
np:)
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niathedragon Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
sparx:gess use some mouth wash dragon statue your melting me!
cynder:*sniggering*im glad!!you deserv it
spyro:*also sniggering*cynder thats not nice but it is funny
statue:HEY!!oh is it realy that bad?
cynder,spyro and sparx:YES!!!
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Dark-Asin Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
O___o this is InDEED AWESUMSAURSTIQUE! :iconbluewhatplz:
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Omg thanks! 8D
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