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Guten Morgen by GoldenTigerDragon Guten Morgen by GoldenTigerDragon
My first money commission for ~4-Elements-Dragon! :rose:

Thanks for commissioning me! :heart:
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:iconmydragonsfly:
Oh boy oh boy oh boy, breakfast in bed!

Vision:
Themes... Well the first one that poped into my mind I've already stated. Not only do I like the theme, as you can probably tell I very much like the gesture. Putting someone else before you, that's always very sweet and it shows your companion that you love them or are thankful and such.

"Breakfast in bed" could be the theme, but I could probably think of many more. If that indeed was the theme then you struck it right on.

Originality:
I don't browse DA for dragon art personally, but I haven't seen many pictures where such as what is shown here are portrayed. Though some dragon pictures I've seen involved a lone dragon or a pair / couple and they were just usually napping, cuddling, lying about, or doing romantic such and such. I'd say its very original.

Technique:
From my level of skill, which is pretty much zero, I'd say this is pretty darn good. It has a great level of detail, from the scales, to the sunlight passing through the thinner wing membranes of the 'ness, the rustles in the bedsheets... The glare of the sun, and the little circles that light that appear when you view it at a certain angle, and off the males shoulder, it's a sun ray!

Looking at the bedsheets in particular however, I don't know why but they just look rough, it doesn't give me the appearance of a soft texture like I'm used to when I look at blankets.

Also, the lighting and shading of the couple. For the amount of light that's coming in, I'd say it looks quite realistic. I can visualize the image quite well and very crisply.

Impact:
Mind blown? I wouldn't necessarily say, I for one have seen many draconic artworks these past few years. When I view the artwork I don't hit a wall, but I'd say its something to give a good look at and really appreciate the amount of work the artist has put in. As for first time viewers, I think it's quite fair to say that they would be very much impressed.

Other comments:
Well first off great job, I love the picture overall, and I'm sure I'm not the only one looking at the comments. The flowers in the bedside vase, I haven't seen that type of species before, but it seems a bit exotic. It really adds to the environment, same to the flowers on the wall.

Focusing on the 'ness now. Her arm seems to be lacking a bit of muscle.

Now moving up and looking at her horns, I don know any specific dementions of her head, but I've always thought that horns that protrude from a dragons head... Well, ok, take a human skull, where a dragons horns would be, push them in so they're as deep as the base of the horn is wide. Now fill in those dents with bone and that's kind of how the cavity where the brain would be, in my opinion. I could never see a dragon with horns pasted on their head, I don't know if that's what artists think in general, but it just wouldn't seem right, and that's what this image is making me think.

Now lets focus on the male. His eyes, one of the first things that caught my attention. They have depth, glimmer, basically they actually look like an eye that doesn't just have a colorful circle with a black dot in the middle.

Looking at his posture, it was kind of hard for me to tell at first weather or not he is sitting on the bed, or walking around its corner. I'm trying to get a sense of his pose based on the angle of the tray, his tail, wings, and how far his head is turned. After realizing the bedding in-between his tail and wing, sitting on the bed with legs at an angle it is.

The signature is in a nice corner just almost to the point of being just barely visible. Also I couldn't tell if this was a feature of the bedsheets or not, but the hearts and watermark are very discretely hidden, here's an internet, no problems in that department.

Wow, first ever critique on DA and its over 700 words... I hope I didn't provide too much irrielvent information.. :)
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:icondragonmaster62835:
Dragonmaster62835 Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful!!! :aww:
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:iconsyroyoga16:
Syroyoga16 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Artist
Omg breakfast in bed for your dragon gal so romantic. Omg your good at this. Keep up the awesome romantic work dragon artist.
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:iconmarblemagic:
Marblemagic Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Dutch?
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:iconnewmoon-dragoness:
NewMoon-Dragoness Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWWWW IS THAT SWEET <,33333333
Videri must really love Mina ^-^
I though first that Videri have Flowers on his hornsxDD
Really great work!*___*
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Tearraven Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oooooiii ku nätit valo efektiiittt tässä 8D
nom nom nom nom omena :3 se on jotenki söpön näköne tossa keskellä XD
Tosi hienosti sait tossa noi siivet sullottua tonne, mulla olis menny hermot tällases kuvas XD
Jotenki onnistut tossa Minassa joka kerta tosi hyvin ;3 Sil on aina tosi nätit silmät sun kuvissa *w* Ja ilme kanssa 8'D
Noi suomut on kans aivan mahtavan näköset 8'D kivat varjot niinku aina :dummy:
Ehkä mun makuun liikaa tota valoo tossa kuitenki x'D mutta ei kysytä mun mielipidettä >83
TOSI KAUNIS :iconilickitplz::heart:
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:iconrogue343:
Rogue343 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
I love this!!!
It's so sweet, him bringing her breakfast!
I love this!!!
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:iconbbluh:
bbluh Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
itken
en ikinä opi piirtää














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miten se tehään
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:icongoldentigerdragon:
GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
kiitos mutta kun





HARJOITTELU TEKEE MESTARIN :icontrollfaceplz:
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:iconbbluh:
bbluh Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i will pee on everything u eat
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:iconanchezio:
Anchezio Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW HOLY SHIT!!! :omfg: How do you do something like this??!?!?!?!?!
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:icongoldentigerdragon:
GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's not my fault it just happened! D::
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:iconanchezio:
Anchezio Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WELL FINE THEN! :iconlazycryplz:
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:iconminerea:
Minerea Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
.........
Is there any way...ANY WAY HOW I CAN THANK YOU BOTH? ;w;
Come on.......my super cute loveley love takes a comission from the super awesome skilled and mepic skilled person like you.....
This really made more than my day....I've never seen Videri and Mina in a situation like this and this................ is more thank epic!!!!
Thank you so much my dear <3
I adore you'r style so much...SO DAMD MUCH :love:
I dunno what to say....
So many beautiful details...
Thank you...
Thank you so much ;w;
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:icongoldentigerdragon:
GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you sooo much <3
Videri wanted me to draw your OCs like this c':
I'm glad you like, your welcome x3
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:iconminerea:
Minerea Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:heart:.:heart:
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:iconsave-animals7:
save-animals7 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist
I love them
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:icondracoandgrace:
DracoAndGrace Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow that's just amazing :O so real like
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:icontyradragoness:
TyraDragoness Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwww! It's so cute! :heart: I'm sure they'll both love this! :dummy:
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:icondragonfreak1112:
dragonfreak1112 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
very nice!! :D love the joy found in this picture. :) the lighting is cool too. :D
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:icontbwolfheart:
TbWolfheart Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Precious. >w<
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:iconshay-tank-dragon-41:
Shay-Tank-Dragon-41 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Even in the morning when Mina looks tired she's still so pretty X3
I love the sunlight effect too ^^
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legarsraide Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMGGGGGG those two, THOSE TWO O3O.you drew them, and they look even more cutie under your hand Goldy. overloadcutenessawesomesauceworkfavedthanksformyeyes!
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Krovash Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great work Goldey, as usuall your art astonishes me with lighting and shading, it's very bright and warm, gives you a feeling like you're on a beach, sunbathing. All the details are in place and they all fit in the right area. As i said, wonderfull job with this one :D
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
I lovelovelovelovelove it !
These scales here are awesmoe,
And expressions are like fffffff- epic :heart:
Also, the shading is PURE WIN
AND I LOVE THE LIGHT EFFECT
ITS LIKE

I srsly got pretty drowsy looking at the picture ;W; I mean, I felt this amazing atmosphere here. ;A;
Plus how you did the bedclothes lsksjflksdjklagjs ;-; I LOVE IIITTTT
great job Goldey . ;u;
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SpyroAndMrKatFan Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
VB \iuaeb BCAUVBUIAEGVUIEGwiurg :iconjawdrop:
This is ....... :iconilavplz: SO AWSOME!!!!
The anatomy, the shading, the coloring, the poses, the backroud, the scales...it's all just, just ...:iconinloveplz::iconbigheartplz:
LOVE IT!! :happycry::iconcryforeverplz: I love+adore this couple so damn much :la: I can't wait for them to move in together :heart:
They're so cute together :aww: And Videri looks so kind on this piccy :squee:
It's briliant!! :iconbrohugplz:
Can't even describe how much i love this :XD:
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D0VAHKllN Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Tää on aivan mahtava! ♥ Toi auringon paiste joka tulvii tosta ikkunasta, aah. Ja noi niiden suomut >u< ♥ Tää on tosi taitavasti tehty!
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:icond0vahklln:
D0VAHKllN Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Ja noi kukat tuolla takana >u< ♥
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SkySpiritDragon Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So beautifull, good work with the scales, the lightning and shading on Mina and Videri, and a nice background
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Nordeva Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Omgaaaaawwwwdddd *___________*
I LOVE this, specially that shading gosh it's soo epic! :dummy:
Keep up the awesome work! x3
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:iconcomplexdiagnosis:
complexdiagnosis Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is absolutely amazing! Your shading and linework is very good.
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:iconpd123sonic:
pd123sonic Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
wow great work i wish i had money
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